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比目鱼的野望

先说一下写这个的人那个班写作课的外教给了这篇文A+。。。此文1楼橱窗里晒过1星期的命。。。

The Difference between Lucky and Lucky Star in Our School

Lucky generally refers to something bad should happen but does not. Also, it is an adjective, which I learnt since the day my English tutor threw that word at me. Quite a bit history I have to say.

Lucky Star is not only a popular anime which is filled with fantastic ideas, but it has already walked into youth vocabulary, deeply and widely in our school.
Lucky Star in our school is popularly called “Nao Can Xing.” Unlike the word ‘lucky’ remains as an adjective, ‘Lucky Star’ can be used both as a noun and an adjective.

As a noun, Lucky Star hints someone is in no-good condition.
When it is revealed to people how dum they are at what they are doing, you can call that guy a Lucky Star.
While as an adjective, it offers full description to someone’s odd action, such as writing a stupid article like what I am doing now.

Nevertheless, Lucky Star and lucky do have overlaps now and then. A lucky thing is sometimes so Lucky Star.
Here is the story: I loved one of my female classmates but she never showed any interests on me. Last valentine, did not learn where my courage came from, I came to her room and told her that I loved her probably more than anyone else in the world.
It was so Lucky Star as I even never had a single hang out with her. But luckily, she accepted my words and became my fiancée.
Though my story is a fiction in lala-land, it does share how lucky and Lucky Star crossed..

40861633

看不懂，强烈要求LZ汉化此文

比目鱼的野望

下面是引用40861633于2008-12-27 08:13发表的:
看不懂，强烈要求LZ汉化此文

我早上已经帮另外一个汉化作业贴汉化了3篇了。。。下午睡醒有心情再说了。
先把在我床上还睡着的死人班长敲起来一起吃饭去。。。8：30之后早餐就停了。。。就又得KFC了~
走了~

40861633

可恶.........不看了..................

bigbread

哈哈哈哈哈哈！！  最后的LALA-LAND啥意思

devilanki

脑残星啊- -..........|||

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LZ可以的 居然能写到有些词别人都看不懂的程度 还用些俚语 这很厉害了 相比某些人 包括我只会翻译会念 就是不会写。

zyjan

很囧的一篇文章~~~

比目鱼的野望

下面是引用spikespiegel于2008-12-27 08:39发表的:
LZ可以的 居然能写到有些词别人都看不懂的程度 还用些俚语 这很厉害了 相比某些人 包括我只会翻译会念 就是不会写。

不是我写的。。。我没这胆子敢把要判分的作文这么写。。。
敢这么写的一般都是对分不在乎的高手~

lala land是指白日梦。

下面是引用zyjan于2008-12-27 08:43发表的:
很囧的一篇文章~~~

绝对囧，这篇文章被晒出来那天进1楼橱窗那可以听见各种XE的笑声。

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下面是引用比目鱼的野望于2008-12-27 09:20发表的:


囧这篇文章被晒出来那天进1楼橱窗那可以听见各种XE的笑声。

说明LZ还是对分在乎的