战神剧情对白补完中！！各方热爱战神的大大进来给个意见啊…

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上次看到flashpig大***的剧情对白，深受其热情感动，眼看文中尚有未补完之处，于是厚起面皮，尝试补完一下…不过可能帖子已老，转眼便被刷下来了，于是斗胆发个新帖，大家给些意见合力补完它也算是为战神这大作作个回应啊……

重申一次此版本仍有很大部分建基于flashpig大大的原文及译文，小弟不敢居功……

感谢flashpig大大这么热心，我试着提议一下，改得不好别介意啊！

"Now, there is no hope."
“现在，已经没有希望了。
And Kratos cast himself from highest mountain in all of Greece. After ten years of suffering, ten years of endless nightmares, it would finally come to an end. Death would be his escape from madness.
于是Kratos从希腊最高的山峰跳了下去。十年的痛苦、十年的噩梦，终于有个解脱。死亡就是他逃离疯狂的途径。
Kratos has once been a champion of the gods’
Kratos也曾经是众神的宠儿

Slaughterd like animals, the victims lay before him. A reminder of his own past, a past could never escape. His only solace was the sea, endlessly sailing from one harbor to the next in service to the gods of Olympus, of his hopes rest within.
像畜狌一样被***的死者，躺满了他眼前。这些都令他联想到过去，他那无法逃避的记忆。他只能不断出海，以侍奉奥林巴斯众神为名义从一个港口走到另一个港口。只有侍奉众神，他才能有一丝希望。

For no matter how much wine he consumed or how many women he took to his bed, nothing on earth could rid him of horrors that plait his mind.
因为无论他灌了多少美酒，拥抱了多少美女，大地上没有一样东西可以令他摆脱烙在他脑中的恐怖
“Athena! Ten years Athena! I have faithfully served the god for ten years! When will you relieve me from this nightmare?”
“雅典娜！十年了，雅典娜！我忠诚地待奉了众神十年了！什么时候你才会从这梦魇解放我？

“We request one final task of you, Kratos. Your greatest challenge waits in Athens, where even now my brother Ares lays siege “ a9vg哦紫 - 本文原载于A9VG游戏社区
“Kratos。神要求你做最后一个任务。就在此刻，雅典正受到我弟弟战神玛尔斯战火的洗礼，而最大的挑战，将在雅典等着你
As we? speak, Athens is on the verge of destruction. It is the wheal of Ares that make the great city fall. It is the wield of Ares my great city falls. Zeus has forbidden Gods from waging war on each other.
我们在这谈话的同时，雅典已经危在旦夕。玛尔斯的神力令巨墻倒塌，令我的城市崩落。由于宙斯禁止神与神之间互相争斗，
“That is why it must be you Kratos. Only a mortal trained by a god has a chance of defeating Ares.”
“所以只有你！Kratos！只有一个被神训练出来的人类才有希望打败阿瑞斯！”
“And if I am able to do this, to kill a god, my visison（幻象）they will end?”
“如果我做到了，如果我把神杀死，那些幻象（指他脑中的记忆）就会结束么？”
“Complete this final task, and the past consumes you will be forgiven. Have faith Kratos. The gods do not forget those who come to their aid.”
“完成这最后的任务，折磨着你的过去将受宽恕。Kratos。你要对神怀有信心。对那些帮助过他们的人，神是不会忘记的。
Leaving ***** behind, Kratos set sails once more. His greatest challenge and the freedom of his growing madness lay before him in the ancient city of Athens.
Kratos再一次踏上征程（原文：扬起了帆，和前面的在海上找到慰藉呼应）。他最大的挑战和自梦魇中解脱的希望，都沉睡在这雅典人的古城里。.

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因时间不多，大家觉得还可以的话我才继续改下去……再献丑了。
Part 2
AND WITH THAT ACT, KRATOS SET IN MOTIONS, THE ADVANCE THAT WOULD LED TO HIS DOWNFALL.
就这么一下子，kratos出手了，踏出了那最后导跳堐的第一步

“Kratos, as Athena herself has fore told. But you’re late, perhaps too late to save Athens. Or is it Athens (that) you have come to save?”
:啊，“Kratos（你来了），就正如雅典娜所预言的的一样。可是你来得太晚了。也许已经晚得不能拯救雅典了，又或者，雅典真是你真心想拯救的么？
“#$%^*%#@$^”
“#$%^*%#@$^”（Kratos痛苦中）
And when the Oracle looked into his soul, she saw a beast as well as a man. Once as a captain in the Spartan’s army, Kratos had become a command with only 55 soldiers, but soon his number of crew***. His tactics were brutal but effective. Run with power he was feared by all, except one – his wife was the only one to brave his fury. ?
当先知窥探他灵魂的时候，她简直看到了一只野兽，也就是他kratos。Kratos曾经是斯巴达军中的队长，开始他指挥着55个部下，不久以后，他的部下已数以千计。他的手段粗钝却有效。以***为原则，所有人都惧怕他，除了——他的妻子——唯一有勇气面对kratos怒火的人。

“How much is enough, Kratos? When will it end?”
“When the glory of Spartan is known to the others.”
“你要杀多少人才够，Kratos？几时才会结朿？”
“当斯巴达斯的荣耀为世人所知！”
“The glorious of Spartan? You did this for yourself.”
“斯巴达斯人的光荣？你只是为了你自己！
HIS desire for conquest HAS NO BOUNDARY. But that what’s he desired, it ultimately consumes him.
他征战四方的欲望无限，但正是这个欲望，最终把他吞蚀得***净净
“Oh My gods. Why has Athena chosen one such as you?”
“神啊！为什么你这种人会被雅典娜选中？”
“Stay out of my head!”
“滚出我的脑袋！
“Choose your enemies wisely Kratos. Your brute strength for alone will not be enough to destroy Ares. Only one item in the world will allow you to defeat the god –Pandora’s Box – which lies far beyond the world of Athens hidden by the god across the desert to the east. But be warned Kratos. Many have gone to search Pandora’s Box, none have returned.”
“Kratos。想清楚再选择你的敌人。你的蛮力并不足以杀死玛尔斯。这世上只有一样宝物能让人击倒神——在跨过东方的沙漠后，远离着雅典的地方，有被众神所隐藏着的潘多拉魔盒——但我要提醒你，Kratos。无数人尝试寻找它，却无一归还。

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Part 3
“Kratos, the journey forward is BEARLESS（这字我也很可能听错了）, but IT'S one you must complete if you are to have any hope of saving Athens.”
Kratos，你眼前的旅程无人能消受，可是你必须完成它，才有那么一丝拯救雅典的可能。

“The Oracle spoke of Pandora’s Box, can that be real?”
“The Box exists. It is the most powerful weapon a mortal can WIN.”
“And WIN such a weapon, I could defeat Ares.”
“Oracle提到潘多拉魔盒，这会是真的么？”
“的确有这魔盒，这是凡人能找到的最强武器。”
“而藉着它，我便可以击倒阿瑞斯。”

“With the box, many things become possible. And so it is hidden well, far across the desert of lost souls. THERE IS A SAFE PASSAGE through the deadly SANDS. But only those WHO hear and follow the SIREN'S SONGS would discovery it. You must find these sirens, Kratos. Only they can guide you to Cronus—the Titan.”
“藉着它，很多事情也变得可能，这也是它被好好隐藏着原因——跨越死灵沙漠，在这致命的沙海中有一条安全的道路，然而，只有那些听到尸人之歌，并跟着歌声走的人才会发现它。你一定要找到这些尸人，只有他们能引领你到泰坦--柯罗诺斯的所在地”
“A Titan lives?！”
“Cronus is the last. ZESUS HAD COMMAND HIM TO WANDER THE DESERT ENDLESSLY. The temple of Pandora CHAINED to his back AND THE SWELLING sand haD ripped the very FLESH from his bones. Stay true to the song of sirens Kratos. Your journey begins here. Pray it leads you back to the Athens.. with Pandora’s box.”
“还有个泰坦活着？！”
“柯罗洛斯是最后一个了。宙斯命令他永远在沙漠中流浪。他背负着被铁链锁上的潘多拉神庙，身上的血肉则被滚滚黄沙刮离了骨头。kratos啊！你要紧随着尸人之歌，你的旅程从那儿开始，我祝愿它能带领你回到雅典，带着潘多拉魔盒回来

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Part 4
The RAPPED(?) of those who were gone in search of Pandora’s Box lay before him. And at once, Kratos knew who was responsible. For this was not first time he see the ruins of Ares and his meanings has left their wake. Kratos has experienced IT FIRSTHANDLY TEN years before.

寻找潘多拉魔盒的人们剩下的断肢残臂洒满了他眼前，马上，Kratos明白了这是谁干的。这不是他第一次看到阿瑞斯的劣迹，他十年前就亲身经历过了。

The youngest and BOLDEST captain in Spartan Army, Kratos INJECTED fearED loyalty in his MEN. It has always been enough to FOLLOW him through any battle until this day.

The barbarians in the east, number to thousandS. And they sent it to the Spartans without mercy. The battle lasted in the hours. THE DISIPLINES FACE TIDES AND *** OF BARBARIANS
身为斯巴达斯军中最年轻和最忘命的士官，Kratos的恐怖使军队对他诚恐听命，这种忠心足以令士兵跟随他出入任何战场，直到有一天……

敌人是数以千计，来自东方的野蛮人，他们毫无怜悯的杀向了史巴达人…，战斗了十数小时，军人们面对着一浪又一浪的野蛮人…
The soliders faced the MASSACRE, and young captain faced the end of his brilliant career and his life. But to Kratos victory was worth any price even his soul.

“Ares! Destroy my enemies and my life is yours!”
That DESPERATE call for aid, would HAUNT Kratos for all his days.
士兵们惨遭大***，而那年轻的士官（kratos）则面对着他光辉军旅以及生命的终结。但是对Kratos来说，为了胜利他愿意牺牲任何代价，甚至出卖他的灵魂。
“阿瑞斯！摧毁我的敌人！我把我的生命给你！！。”
而这绝望的呼救……却缠上了Kratos一辈子。”
“Oh the gods, what have I become?”
“神啊！我变成了什么？”

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实在没有时间了，只好先贴上小子听来的第五部份原文再粗译一些……

Kratos has been in service to the god long enough to know that the harpy WAS SENT AS A warning, a reminder from his former master of a decision that has cost Kratos everything. Had it been that long since he’d almost met his end by the hands of barbarians, that long since he traded everything to save himself?
Kratos知道哈耳皮埃（身是女人, 而翅膀、尾巴及爪似鸟的怪物，代表残酷和贪婪）的出现是一种讯息，是他旧主人在提醒他以前所作的代价……距离那次自己差点死在那野蛮人手中，距离他用一切去换回自已的生命的时候，真有这么久了吗?
“Ares!”
The sky SPLITTED APART, and the God of War stepped through.
DESCENDING from Olympus, THE GOD OF WAR **** TO A NEW MORTALS
Ares WOULD saved Kratos. He WOULD turned him to a perfect warrior – his servant on earth. Only a simple PURGE OF loyalty required – “My life is yours, Ares. From this day, I shall carry forth your will.”
“阿瑞斯！”
天空分开了，战神跨过了天空。从奥林匹斯山下来了，战神回应了一个凡人的呼唤（这句纯是猜的）。
阿瑞斯会解救Kratos。他会把Kratos变成了完美的战士——他在大地上的仆人……只需要那么“一点点”的忠心……“我的命是你的了，阿瑞斯。从今天起，我将在人间执行你的意旨。）
And his fate was sealed. As promised, Areas rescued his new XXX. BRINGING FORTH the power of a God, DESTROYING those who would slaughter Kratos and his MEN. As for Kratos, NONE A SWORD OR SHIELD WOULD FIT a servant to the God of War. The blades of chaos, FORGED IN THE FOULEST DEPTH OF HYDES, ONCE ATTACHED, THE CHAIN REMAIN SO, CHAINED AND SEARED INTO THE FLESH, IT BECAME A PART OF THE BEARER'S BODY, A PERMANENT REMINDER OF THE BEARER'S PLEDGE. BUT IN RETURN...ULTIMATE POWER. THE RAGE OF ARES EXPLODED FROM WITHIN, BUT SOON HE WOULD LEARN TO COST SUCH POWER, A COST TOO HIGH EVEN FOR KRATOS TO PAY.
而他的命运也就此注定了。按照承诺，阿瑞斯拯救了他的新仆人，使用着神的力量，他摧毁所有***着kratos和他手下的人。至于kratos么，没有任何一柄剑或盾配得上战神的仆人……（只有）混沌之刃……在冥帝哈帝斯最邪恶的深渊中铸成，混沌之刃一旦附身，锁链就永远保持原状，紧紧锁扣和烙入血肉，成为持有者身体的一部份……以永远提醒持有者当时的呼愿，作为回报的……则是终极的力量。混沌之刃爆发出战神的怒火（现在明白为何用刃时有火光了么?）……而他很快就会知道得到这力量的代价……那怕是他kratos也万万付不起……

XXX beast! I know who your serve. Return to your master. Tell the God of War I am his no longer. Tell him he will not be safe while I walk ON earth. I will find Pandora’s Box. And I will use it..,.TO see him trembling AND fall before me.
“你这怪物滚开！我知道你主子是谁。滚回去告诉战神我已非他手中的东西。告诉他，一朝我还活在世上（在大地上行走）他就不会安全。我会找到潘多拉魔盒，我还会使用它，看着战神在我面前抖颤着倒下！”

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Baryon

提个建议哈，把你修改的部分用不同的颜色标出来吧，不然看不出来啊。