发帖求翻译

zydm1412

This level does have the killzone feel to it with really good sackbot animations but the lack of music and repetitive gameplay really lets it down. Here's my feedback -

Intro is awesome and I love the space ships (if they you made them yourself then kudos) although the missiles flying across could be shorter or made more exciting by having the other ships firing at you with other mini ships flying around fighting each other
Change the lighting and background to emphasize the nuclear strike which will also make it look more like killzone
make it more clear when the gun is overheated
this section goes on for way to long with not enough variation to it which means when you get the boss the diffi***y curve spikes up meaning it's not as fun as it should be
The main thing you need to do is add music as without it the level loses a lot of it's playability because the level seems dull without it when it should be really exciting.


求人翻译下这段话，尝试谷歌翻译了一下，但是不是太懂，这是老外给我的关于小小大星球自制关卡的一个回帖

乱世衰人

This level does have the killzone feel to it with really good sackbot animations but the lack of music and repetitive gameplay really lets it down. Here's my feedback -
本关卡确实有一些kz的感觉，但缺少音乐和游戏性

Intro is awesome and I love the space ships (if they you made them yourself then kudos) although the missiles flying across could be shorter or made more exciting by having the other ships firing at you with other mini ships flying around fighting each other
开场很不错，我喜欢宇宙战舰，如果战舰是你自己做出来的那就太nb了。但是！飞来飞去的导弹可以再短些（或者飞的路线再短些，单看上下文无法判断），或者让战舰朝你开火或者互相乱战。

Change the lighting and background to emphasize the nuclear strike which will also make it look more like killzone
make it more clear when the gun is overheated
最好改变一下环境光效和背景来强调核爆，这能让关卡看起来更kz，同时让***过热时的提示更加清楚

this section goes on for way to long with not enough variation to it which means when you get the boss the diffi***y curve spikes up meaning it's not as fun as it should be
流程太长了，又缺乏多样性，打老怪时难度太平（或者太高？这个从句实在让人看不懂……lz自己悟吧），损失了不少乐趣

The main thing you need to do is add music as without it the level loses a lot of it's playability because the level seems dull without it when it should be really exciting.
你最需要做的就是添加背景音乐，没有配乐，关卡就是屎一团

乱世衰人

感谢就不用了，lz有空给我lbp加两个心吧，是1代哦

kmfdm

对LZ的评价都还算认真 没看到有胡说八道的

zydm1412

乱世衰人 发表于 2011-9-17 14:05
感谢就不用了，lz有空给我lbp加两个心吧，是1代哦

刚想感谢的说，回家赶紧琢磨背景音乐，不然就成屎一团了