[闲聊]“皇牌空战”与“王牌空战”

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简直不成体统，一下是我的序的翻译
This is a war.
This is a war for the survival of mankind.
This is a war between people.
This is a card with the card shore war.
It took three years that all good things.
It took three years that all peaceful atmosphere.
It took three years that all the weak human nature.
Each of the three years it took the soldiers hope.
However, it concluded. 10 years later, I still can Wendaonei smoke atmosphere.
It does not bode nor closing ceremony.
Some simply, cruel killings.
It damaged the continent, As the shredded the sky, breaking the ocean.
Left only sanguinity Canyang.
It has exactly the past 10 years.
People from the war survive, but also to begin a new life.
They are repairing the mainland, heal the sky, weaving ocean.
Them more confidence in the construction of the firm, indomitable will, and : : all the wonderful things.
Pilots, and some left the beloved aircraft, the remaining options guarding the skies.
Tank soldiers, some descended the location of ***s, the remaining options watch continent.
Submarine soldiers, some from living warships, the remaining options conquer the sea.
However, some people in the decade before they were chosen and survival.
Some people in the decade before and they leave together.
Physical pain and mental trauma, the time is slowly healing.
Then, with the passage of time, the war will be far away from us?


-- from the former leader Edward.H.Raphael majors memoirs Mobius
"broken sky"


以下是原文：
这，是一场战争。
  这，是一场为了人类生存的战争。
  这，是一场人与人之间的战争。
  这，是一场皇牌与皇牌对决的战争。
  它夺走了那三年中一切美好的事物。
  它夺走了那三年中所有和平的气息。
  它夺走了那三年中全部薄弱的人性。
  它夺走了那三年中每个士兵的希望。
  但，它结束了。十年之后，我依然能闻到那硝烟的气息。
  它，没有预兆，也没有闭幕式。
  有的只是，残酷的杀戮。
  它，震裂了大陆，撕碎了天空，击破了海洋。
  留下的，只是血色残阳。
  它已经整整过去十年了。
  从这场战争幸存下来的人们，也开始了新的生活。
  他们正在修补大陆，治愈天空，编织海洋。
  他们，更是在修筑那坚定的信心，顽强的意志，以及……一切美好的事物。
  飞行员们，有的离开了心爱的座机，其余选择守卫天空。
  ***兵们，有的走下了久居的战车，其余选择守望大陆。
  潜艇兵们，有的告别了生活的战舰，其余选择征服大海。
  可是，有的人在十年之前就选择了与它们共存亡。
  也有的人在十年之前就与它们一起离开。
  身体的疼痛，心灵的创伤，正在被时间缓缓治愈。
  那么，随着时间的推移，战争会远离我们吗？


                ——摘自前Mobius队长Edward.H.Raphael少校回忆录
                           《破碎的天空》


你说说这算什么………………
  

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"broken sky"  

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看看这个：I still can Wendaonei smoke atmosphere.
对比这个：我依然能闻到那硝烟的气息。
这翻译水平我没话说了，注意上句第4个单词以及下句第5~7字-_-||

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看来出Ｅ文版的时候要严格把关了

aboutl

下面是引用lt.blaze于2006-07-10 20:54发表的:
………………然后逐个开分区就行了

晕倒……这位真是…………纯真啊………………