关于翻译ＡＣＯ的建议

永濑萤

从现在开始规范一下，希望以后在这些词语、句子上的翻译能统一
Roger = 明白

Roger. XMAA firing sequence initiated.
明白。　ＸＭＡＡ　准备发射。

Roger. Ready to fire.
明白。　发射准备完成。

Roger. QAAM firing sequence initiated.
明白。　ＱＡＡＭ　准备发射。

Quick-maneuver missile ready to fire.
高机动导弹发射准备完成。

Roger. Let's see how they like this one!
明白。来看看他们喜不喜欢这个！

Roger. Ready to roll.
明白。准备耍一下。

Roger. Holding release of special weapons.
明白。不使用特殊兵装。

Roger. Arming hot.
明白。随时准备发射。

Negative. No ammo left.
All we have is regular ordnance.
做不到。没有弹药了。
只剩下普通兵装了。

Roger.
Master arm switch is in the safe position.
明白。
打开特殊兵装保险。

Roger. Usage prohibited.
明白。　不使用特殊兵装。

没完呢……

japp

Roger. Ready to fire.
明白。　准备开火

一般是准备的动作完成了,才说吧?

永濑萤

Wilco.
了解。

Copy that.
知道了。

Roger that!
明白！

Roger. Leave 'em to me.
明白，交给我吧！

Roger. I'm on it.
明白。　我这就去做。

Got it. Let me at 'em.
知道了，　我去对付他们。

Roger. Focusing on air targets.
明白。　集中火力攻击空中目标。

Roger. We'll focus our fire on air targets.
明白。　我会对空中目标集中火力。

Roger. They're anti-air attack.
明白。　集中火力攻击空中目标。

Roger. Focusing all fire on air targets!
明白。　集中全部火力攻击空中目标！

Roger. I'll cover you.
明白。　我会掩护你。

Got it. I'll back you up.
知道了。　我会在你后面。

Roger that. I'll watch your back!
明白了。　我会看好你的后面的！

没完……

永濑萤

Roger. We're free to engage at will now.
明白。　现在我们想怎么来就怎么来。

Roger. I'm on my own then.
明白。　现在看我自己的了。

Roger that. Moving to engage at will.
明白了。　自由行动交战。

I'm in a jam here. Just give me a minute.
我这里敌人太多了，给我一点时间。

Negative. I'm sorry.
办不到，很遗憾。

永濑萤

bandit  敌机
Turn hard  全力回旋
Break!　回避！

Cipher, you've got a bandit at six.
Ｃｉｐｈｅｒ，　有敌机在你六点方向。

Watch out, you've got a bandit at six.
小心，　有敌机在你六点方向。

Bandit on your tail closing fast! Break!
有敌机在你后面高速接近！回避！

Buddy, he's on you! Turn hard!
Ｂｕｄｄｙ，　他抓住你了！　全力回旋！

Bandit at six! Deflect!
六点有敌机！　回旋！

Behind you! Break!
在你后面！　回避！

Cipher, you've got a bandit on your tail.
Ｃｉｐｈｅｒ，　有敌机咬在你后面！

Hard right, now!
向右急回旋，　快！

Turn! Turn hard, now!
回旋！　急回旋，　快！

Galm 1, get outta there!
Ｇａｌｍ　１，　离开那！

Galm 1, bandit on your tail, turn hard!
Ｇａｌｍ　１，　敌机咬在你后面，急回旋！

Galm 1, deflect!
Ｇａｌｍ　１，　回旋！

I'm on his tail.
我咬在他后面了。

He's mine!
他是我的了！

Almost locked on.
几乎锁定了。

I got you! You're not getting away!
我抓到你了！　你跑不掉了！

I'm on his tail!
我咬住他了！

I'm locked on the enemy.
我锁定敌人了！

I'm in position! Engaged!
我进入位置了！交火！

Got him! On my nose!
抓到他了！差点撞上！

头大……太多……还没完………………

japp

Got him! On my nose!
逮住了！就在我前面！

永濑萤

tracking you on radar  用雷达照射你
locked on to you  锁定你了
Evasive action  回避动作


C'mon, just a bit more.
来吧，　还差一点点。

I'm right behind him.
我就在他正后方！

Watch out.
The enemy's tracking you on radar.
小心！
敌机正在用雷达照射你！

Watch out.
The enemy's locked on to you.
小心！
敌机锁定你了！

Missile inbound! Move your jet, Cipher!
导弹来袭！　快回避，　Ｃｉｐｈｅｒ！

Evasive action! Missile!
回避动作！　导弹！

Missile inbound! Break! Break!
导弹来袭！　回避！　回避！

Incoming missile! Lose it!
导弹接近！　甩开他！

Galm 1! Evasive action!
Ｇａｌｍ　１！　回避动作！

Galm 1! Missile! Missile inbound!
Ｇａｌｍ　１！　导弹！　导弹来袭

Shake it off! Break right!
甩开他！　向右回避！

Break, missile!
回避，　导弹！

Missile inbound! Break! Break!
导弹来袭！　回避！　回避！

Galm 1! Missile warning!
Ｇａｌｍ　１！　导弹警报！

差不多了吧？还差得远……

永濑萤

下面是引用japp于2007-11-13 19:12发表的:
Got him! On my nose!
逮住了！就在我前面！

差点撞上更有感觉的说……

永濑萤

down 击落


Cipher, respond!
Ｃｉｐｈｅｒ，　回答！

Someone's been hit!
有人被击中了！

Enemy down!
击落敌机！

Nice work! Next target!
干得好！　下一个！

Cipher's crashed!
Ｃｉｐｈｅｒ＇ｓ　坠毁了！

Someone's been hit!
有人被击中了！

I missed.
我射失了。

Damn! It didn't connect.
该死！　这没用。

Evaded! That's some crazy maneuvering!
回避！　那个机动动作真是疯了！

Run him down!
把他打下来！

Aim carefully!
小心瞄准！

The enemy's in plain sight.
Don't let him escape!
能很清楚的看到敌机。
别让他跑了！

Let's get up close and personal!
让我们好好会一会！

He's behind me!
他就在我后面！

He's at my six!
他在我六点钟方向！

Right behind you, heads up!
就在你后面，　飞高点！

Bandit at 6 o'clock. Shake him off.
敌机在你六点钟方位，　甩开他。

还没完……真多……不过每个MISSION都有这些……再坚持一会发完了统一起来就方便了……

japp

下面是引用永濑萤于2007-11-13 19:14发表的:

差点撞上更有感觉的说……

作战的时候关键是传达的意思准确, 报用简洁精练的语言报告自己的状态, 而非产生歧义, 若说"差点撞上"的话, 队友就会问你"怎么了?没事吧..." 然后必然的回答就是"没事~~" 8是浪费时间么 ?^^